Writing and Thoughts...

Well, I keep posting my writing here and hoping SOMEONE will read and comment, but I keep getting zilch. I'm gonna ask again that people read the stories and comment because I need input to improve. Just click on the 'writing' link in the list of tags to get them all to see.

Also, I have another request. I need to improve on doing detail and description. Right now I'm far too sparse on the details in scenes- if people can pass on to me short ideas for a scene to describe, in other words get me a phrase like 'a street scene in the bad part of a city' or similar, I'll try to write a paragraph or so in description. Thanks!